Hey sarah, this was an interesting piece to read, if im honest (which i am otherwise why comment at all!) i thought it should have been broken up into stanza's instead of just one big paragragh,(although maybe thats just a personal thing, not sure), also i noticed quite a few spelling mistakes which really spoils a good poem.

Its a really good attempt at expressing feelings thought thru depression i too have some knowledge of this subject so weel done for that.

Only because of the errors and stuff i rated this a 3/5, but with some work could easy be a 5/5.

Gary.

I know how u feel. thats what its like for me. great job 5/5