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by Alicia Jane   Oct 26, 2007


She's finally over the past,
only good things last.
depression was her flaw,
now she's shown it the door.
frowns were her expression,
now smiles are her illustration.
she's learned wrong from right,
now her mistakes help her fight.
love was the cure for it all,
now music is the way to not fall.
she promises on her life knowing she means more,
but some promised are ridiculous and not worth caring for.
friends put her down like a fool,
now they cherish her smile that shines bright like never before.

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not finished
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  • 8 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    HONE GREAT POEM, YES A HAPPY ONE, VERY NICE TO KNOW THAT PEOPLE DITCH DEPRESSION , THERE ARE HAPPY THINGS OUT THERE, LOVE IT.

  • 9 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Wow! Really good!!

    It describes me basically n all, lol.. very well worded... you have a way with writing :-)

    Keep it up!

    Danielle
    X

  • 9 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Great can't wait to read it when its done. VERY GOOD, flows so nicely

  • 9 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Very nice!... "frowns were her expression now smiles are her illustration" This lines are meaningful to me... I love it... 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    :) Its a very happy poem.....
    Hmmm... but I kinda lyk sad poems at the moment
    Very descriptive though :)
    Nadia

    5/5