What a very sad tale, and unfortunately so true of the lives of young people who are harassed by bullies. Well written and moving

Omg wow
this is soo powerful and moving
i'm quite sad now after reading this, got tears coming...
flowed really well and the emotion just poured out
really well written x
5/5

Omg...tht s so sad.....so powerful and meanigful....i loved it! So well wirtten......grea work! 5/5 Keep it up!

You ask me to read this poem. It was great and I loved it. You could probably get this poem published. Great job and keep writing.

Love & God bless
Lauren

Pretty good poem for being crusty lol i think you ment rusty there but o well i knew what you ment in this poem as i have wittness bullying and been bullied myself ^_^ its annoying and stuff but in the end they dont really want you dead at the end they are morning just as much as anyone else for the guilt that they had well writen read some of mine some times my main ones are love and life but thats all i really can write for some odd reason plus my dark ones scare people lol
Mark

Wow it's really good
and i'm not just saying this because you asked me to write you a comment :)
It left me in tears. (although I'm quite unhappy at the moment)
Sarah x x
Return the favour please... I'll read more of your work :)

Really good poem.. Dark but not too dark, sad though!
Bullys don't realise quite they do sometimes.. Hard topic to write about but you did it well! 5/5
Read & comment/vote some of mine please
Thanks x

I really enjoyed reading your poem and the moral that it gives.

=P i had time, no problem in that.
oooo when i read it, i totally could imagine it. really sad poem. nice choice of words, simple, but really good.
5/5 ^^

Absolutely amazing.
pure brilliance.
X

This is so heartbreaking to read, yet so beautifully written at the same time.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to put in so much depth and emotion and that isn't always easy to do.

Flow was good throughout and the imagery you created painted some vivid pictures.

Beautifully written.

This is so sad. . :[

this is a great poem.
&& had great flow.
5/5.

WOW ! one of the best poems on here. I love it alot . Funny though something happen to this guy i know . It's sad how people can be so crapy to one person they don't even know . well , ya any who ..
Good work/poem .
And 5/5

Firstly thanks for the comment on my poem ^^ This is a really poewerfull poem and it DOES get the point across really well ^^ you shouldn't pick on people to make you feel bigger just because your unsecure...It isnt fair! I'm adding you to my favorite's list ^^ love you loads xxx Mwah from Roxy

Wow so sad your a really good writer

I can see why this piece has such a high rating. It’s well deserved, and I’m more than happy to continue its running success. It was a very powerful and humbling piece. Not only by its content, but by its flawless flow and effortless rhymes. This is another great piece I shall add to ‘my favourites’.

Brad

P.S. I re-read my poem ‘Have you ever tried to help someone?’ and you’re right, the middle stanza is the weakest, but as I always say, the start and end have to be the strongest points, and it seems I follow my own advice at least, lol.

Excellent, you are a very good poet.. Good job.. very meaningful