I think this is my favourite out of what I've read of yours. I, too, live in a small town, and I love it. I think, despite its size, a small town can really tell a story. Possibly even more so than a city or a large vibrant place that's constantly busy.

Nicely written. I enjoyed it.

Another poem with good a use of repitition and a lovely flow. You put so much detail into each stanza, its a wonderful talent. Keep writing! *5/5*

"Small town, where I grew my little heart
I've been there for so long, right from the start
Days are harsh, but it's a lot of fun to be there
When in a small town, there's nothing to despair"

^^What a beautiful opening. So much emotion that it pulls the reader straight in to the piece.

Your flow in this is perfect, the words just rolled right from my tounge, while the imagery you painted was beautifully done, it created some beautiful visuals for me.

My favourite part was the ending stanza, it was so beautifully detailed and descriptive, it was like I could -see- and -feel- everything that you were describing.

I liked the rhyming and structure. The poem's flow went so well... keep it up 5/5

This was truely a passionate piece written. Really sweet and held great emotion in it. You have written about something which seems to be held deep within your heart. I'd take a small town over a big city any day. Well done on this. Truely Beautiful. ~Mel

Very nice poem, I can relate to it very much. There is always the place you call home no matter how small or big it is.

You have a great way of putting your emotions out on the table and have them flow like you did here. Beautiful write.

Small town, where I grew my little heart
I've been there for so long, right from the start
Days are harsh, but it's a lot of fun to be there
When in a small town, there's nothing to despair
^ mii fav stanza! great job tho! it captured mii attention very nicely written and everything was just really good!

Simple and sweet! I live in a small town too, so small they're calling it a village. This poem was very well written! 5/5

Wow...
This touched me deeply. Whole poem is so beautiful and your precise and fantastic descriptions made it even better. I like everything about this piece, especially the vivid imagery and your great expression of emotions.
The ending stanza is my favorite, it is the most effective and captivating, filled with feelings that really touched me. I can relate to this piece in a way.
Keep writing!

Wow i loved it! I loved the story line to it a complex situation in a simple write, very well done 5/5 all the way

laura

I really like the part
- Small town, where everything is so small after all -
It is duplicated but nice. I like your work

Ohh i had noticed that some of ur poems that i had read has a same style like repeating the words from the beginning of the stanza but though still u had done a great job.. and all the flow was nice and very marvelous work .

Wow, I loved this poem. The flow as well as the structure was good. The rhymes where good as well as your choice of wording. Great work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Uhm.. I believe you like the use of repetitions? Anyway..

You've created another beautiful poem.
(I think this poem is about the place you grew up - sorry if I'm wrong)

I think every line is great... well except for one. I didn't get this line that much..

But people always there just to return your call

I think it should be...

But people (are) always there just to return your call

*This is just a suggestion*

Anyway good job on this one! :)

Simply amazing.
i liked the rhyme scheme
and i like the wayy you worded this. :]
it's a beautiful poem
and deserves a 5/5 from me! :]

I really liiked this poem....it had niice flow...and i liike the ryming in it!!! great job!!!

<3 i love you silly

A poem about life .. nice one .. i thought you only write love poems.. every poem you made me read r all love poems.. this is something different. i love it =] another great poem made by you!

I thought it was pretty good, but at parts the rhyming seemed forced, or a line or two didnt sound quite right, it was still good though, but im going to have to give this a 4/5, srry mate, it was still good though

Stephanie Naylor