Comments : Vein-artery

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    "I want to be a parasite
    Living inside someone
    Loving them and thriving off them"

    Deranged ... but touches the heart, and leaves fingerprints of grace.
    Your writing is like a drug; I can't get enough of it.

    Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Kind of wierd love poem but the truth is it's very beautiful poem...full of desires

    "what happened to me? what i am doing..i feel like i was hypnotised"
    lol