Wow, this piece is simply beautiful! I love it, you created wonderful atmosphere. Very deep and unique poem, I admire your talent and this piece is so impressing. I congrats you, your first Triquatrain, is really excellent. Well done!

I think you did extremely well for your first triquatrian... i couldn't do half as good. really enjoyed it. I don't think I've read a poem in this style as of yet.

Beautiful, specialy the end just ahh brilliant. The triquatrian seems to me kinda hard but you made an amazing job on this one.
Amazing job on this one!
5/5

I'm not such a huge fan of positive poetry, but i couldnt help but truly be inspired by your piece, it was magnificent, and a complete joy to read... and to be forthright it being a triq..whatever...made no difference to me, i simply enjoyed the poem...:)

This kind of poems is new to me. I can tell that you've done a great job. The choosing of words was excellent and the rhyming were great as well. 5/5

I think it's not easy , but you make a Triquatrain poem easy to be write. I didn't see you forced your words to follow the rhymes.. Very enjoyable poem,, Nice flow and choice of words..
Well done,, keep up the good work..
5/5

Wow, totally loved this poem. You expressed the feeling very well and the flow was nice. It was great. 5/5

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This is a pretty poem. it was very smooth. 55

This imagery here was just wonderful. It flowed flawlessly was was quite effective. I loved the hope and optimism it held in the last stanza. You're so right, we should always hold on even if times get rough.

Beautiful work. *5/5*

Wow
that sounds like it wouldve been hard to write that poem!
it would probally be suicide for ME to attept that.lol
Great job

Wow what a wonderful Triquatrain. I like the word choice and the flow of your poem. I just love the way you have written it 5/5 all the way

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This is written in a good way, it is very deep and profound.
I like the form that you picked, and your rhymes are very good.
My favorite stanza is:

-Shoot for the skies, for tomorrow never dies,
Second chances come and go like seasons.
Keep holding on, because it's a new dawn,
Of searching for a place with light and reason.-

Truly amazing poem!!! i fell in love with these verses:

"Look towards the sky, as life passes by,
Leaving behind a pale and broken sunset.
It is time to move on, the past is gone,
Say goodbye to strife and endless regrets."

"Shoot for the skies, for tomorrow never dies,
Second chances come and go like seasons.
Keep holding on, because it's a new dawn,
Of searching for a place with light and reason"

beautiful write 5/5:)

Refreshingly beautiful, elegant and lyrical. A piece of hope in a dim world.

Gorgeously done; the rhyming and rhythm of the poem was flawless. There were very minor problems with meters here and there, but nothing to fret over.

"In a world so small, I'm beginning to fall,
Not knowing how to deal with another day."
Bold begining, it's great to start with something everyone can relate to. It urges them to keep reading.

"Seeing in black and white, wrong or right,
Learn to be content with shades of gray."
Contrast and acceptance. Haven't seen that done before, but it turned out great!

"It is time to move on, the past is gone,"
Simple, but the message here rings clear.

"Shoot for the skies, for tomorrow never dies,
Second chances come and go like seasons."
'skies' and 'tomorrow' are very hopeful words, so this stanza was your "brightest". Also, I liked how you incorporated 'seasons' into th poem, forthe readers amkes a link between hope and nature.

"Keep holding on, because it's a new dawn,
Of searching for a place with light and reason."
'dawn' and 'light', again with the brightfulness and nature.

Very impressive poem!