Powerful, greatly written and filled with emotions. You did good job with rhymes, creating truly flawless flow through the whole piece. I can relate to this piece in many ways.
I like the way you write- putting so many excellently expressed emotions in the poems.
Keep up!
5/5

Mog..i love this! Its soooo haunitng and...wow...all i can say is this is aweosme and i added it to my faves! Keep it up!

I liked this very much, my favorite stanza was the same as Stephanie mentioned. just brilliant in every way. I look forward to reading more. Timothy r