I really liked the way you conveyed this poem it was very well written good job.

lots of love meg

Aww Josh, who is this about? :'( Almost made me cry! I love it though! 5/5 ^^

Liked this one a lot:)
really well written
good job.

keep up the good work:)

That is sad and real good

This one is nice!!!!!

Wow, that's so sad, very pretty though, deep too!

Awww
Like it
<3
~Ally

Hmmm....interestingly random. I like the beginning, I start out poems with popular rhymes when I can't think of anything to write....lol good job though....I dk..

Awww...i wonder who you are writing about there...i would love it if a guy wrote a poem like that to me! yet another great piece of work from you...keep up the great work!! 5/5

Beautiful...that's really sweet. You're so talented. Amazing how you sum up your feelings in such small and simple words.

That was so beautiful
reminds me of a poem I wrote called my star
check it out when you can.
you are a fantastic writer and you should continue writing always.
take care
Lisa

Loved it but sad =(