Oh my I am going to cry...

This really hit home with me. The realization of finally making up your mind that it is time to say goodbye is so damn hard, I could truly relate. The images you created with your words were almost haunting and truly spoke to me. WOW.... well done *5/5*

Awwww...wow....this poem was soo amazing!! i loved how you described how you felt and how you wrote this poem. ive had smiliar experiences also, and i just wanna say you wrote a beautiful poem! 5/5

Ok its creative and heartfilled
and if you have ever tooken a poetry class
or in my opionon read a book witch is helpful theyll tell you that poems are
beatiful things out in beatiful places and a poem is made with symbolism and a much bigger words witch \this is mor eof a soong and a poem is a rythem of sort of course so it should be kinda a song but this is like A
ACTUAL song as a country song
and personification is a big part
look it up
and this poem with sybolism and persinification would of been excilent
and a lil
cleshae
but keep up the hard work

This poem is basically brilliant. Your vocabulary usage were very well thought out and used. You catch my attention from the first stanza and holds it till the very end. You've used a few poetic devices in the piece which really make the poem even better. The poem wasn't too short nor too long which is good because it doesn't intimidate the reader. The emotion is quite strong and I could feel it. It's something many people can relate to. Very deep piece. Touches the reader. Amazing. I think you're the clear winner for the club contest. Well done and congrats. Keep writing.

I loved the emotion in this peice. Wow, your words paint an amzing picture in my mind. Your vocabulary chioce deepens it all and makes it into a really great peace. I think that the last stanza really sums it all up. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

I really liked the idea of this poem, and I know how that feels. It's been hard for me to say goodbye to someone, and it doesn't matter what they put me through, i want to be with them. Excellent work. :]

Wow!! that poem was amazing. u use such great words to describe urself!! very touching write. keep it up =) xo