You say you do

by cameron   Nov 1, 2007


You say you do you say you will, after all its just a thrill,
my hopes get up you let them down, then you wondered why id frown,
i loved you more than you ever could, when i talked it was like talking to wood,
i loved you more that much i knew, but baby i wished it where the same for you,
old times where good talking on the phone, we'd talk till late two or three hours at a time,
we had so much fun you and i, we went together like a pie,
good times bad times we had much love little did we no it would go as quick as it come,
living together forever we thought, loving each other more and more we sought,
but soon enough the day had come, closer and closer to my friend you become,
step by step i saw it unfold, my best friend was who you wanted to hold,
angry i was but nothing i could do, for i wanted the best of the best for you,
now we are two no longer one but babe you no we still have fun!

true story!..
by cameron

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahh

    I like it, well done 5/5
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Haha ouch... Nice poem, cept a few times it seems like you tried to hard to make it rhyme, but d/w we all do it sometimes!! Nice work, 5/5

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