A Lonely Heart!

by James Weatherbee   Nov 1, 2007


I was falling so fast;
I knew it wouldn't last;
but I still held tight;
told my self it would be alright;
but you still walked away;
I couldn't make you stay;
yet I still tried hard;
I let down my guard;
all we did was fight;
looking too the night;
I start to think;
of just how much life does stink;
when its you I cant see;
standing right here next to me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Very well writen and i can totaly relate!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh, Very well poem and true. I loved it! perilous steps arent never worth it. Again, great poem. and thanks for the wonderful comment.

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Awwww...it so sad!! i still like it tho!! 50/5 (lol! if only the scale was that high!!)

  • 16 years ago

    by Little Minx

    It was very good i liked it :) lol... but one thing i didnt like was when you used stink lol i dunno it just seemed a little off to me :P maybe just me but it was very good :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    I really like this..

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