5/5 excellent work as always. your poem is so heartfelt and filled with the painful reality. youre words are so full of emotion well done

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEE
sweeeeeeeeeet n short
i luv it :)
5/5

You're a very talented writer i've been threw a lot of your poems, and this one made me add u to my favorite authors!!! great job

I really like this..

It was very good i liked it :) lol... but one thing i didnt like was when you used stink lol i dunno it just seemed a little off to me :P maybe just me but it was very good :)

Awwww...it so sad!! i still like it tho!! 50/5 (lol! if only the scale was that high!!)

Oh, Very well poem and true. I loved it! perilous steps arent never worth it. Again, great poem. and thanks for the wonderful comment.

-Sarah A.

Very well writen and i can totaly relate!