Great job this is a lovely poem
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Ths poem also had a good flow, Good work

Wow!!! The imagery in this piece is superb. The word choice is strong as is the emotion. Speaking if emotion I think you have nailed that in this piece, it oozes out of the piece. There is a beautiful story in this amazing piece. The flow is a little rough but its still easy flow. I love this piece, you have penned a perfect piece. Excellent job, 5/5 from me