Comments : Loneliness Knows Me By Name (contest)

  • 16 years ago

    by LiViNg To DiE

    AWESOME!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    This was great, i loved it, it was awesome. keep it up, 5*5
    Kimberly

  • 15 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Hey Jay this is a pretty good poem but i think you could have used some different vocab in places to make it a little stronger for example

    Drowned in a world un-known, Could have been

    Drowned in a catastrophic world un-known. That type of thing.

    Good meaning though i liked it =)