Miserable

by jyzka   Nov 3, 2007


How long would I be waiting,
for you to come for me?
How long would I endure,
the pain that is increasing?

What would I do with my eyes,
whom only you that is seeking?
And what would I do with my heart,
that seems to be misleading?

Will waiting for you be of benefit
or waiting for you would make me defeated.
Was letting go the right answer,
or will it just make me more pathetic?

Would you help me to be over you?
would you help me, on not to love you?
for I am lost in reality
drowning with my own misery.

So please let me go
release my heart that is imprisoned.
I wanted my freedom back
and taste the serene life that was once lost in my life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    How you wrote it is just fine, Made a few changes to it because if I read a verse six times and still don't get it. Something needs to be fixed. These are changes ment to give you ideas and to see it in a different way.

    How long would I be waiting,
    for you to come for me?
    How long would I endure,
    the pain that is ever increasing?

    What would I do with my eyes,
    when its only you that Im seeking?
    And what would I do with my heart,
    that seems to be misleading?

    Will waiting for you be of benefit
    or will it mean my defeat.
    Was letting go the right answer,
    or will it just make me more pathetic?

    Would you help me to be over you?
    would You even care?
    For I am lost in reality
    drowning with my own misery.

    So please let me go
    release my heart that been imprisoned.
    I wanted my heart back
    So I may give it to someone worth loving.

    L.S. Moore

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