Jerry Bear

by TwiztidJuggalette   Nov 4, 2007


Why did you have to leave?
I feel so lost and alone,
Everyday I find myself crying,
Trying to be very strong.
Nothing seems important anymore,
Since I can't hold you in my arms,
Feeling you warm loving embrace,
Feels like I've lost my good luck charm.
Jerry you ment a lot to me,
More than you'll ever know
Whenever I ever heard your name,
Pure happiness is what always showed.
You made my life worth living,
Your what helped me stay alive,
My life holds no meaning now,
I don't know how much longer I can survive.
Don't bother coming and looking for me
When you come back around,
For I fear it'll be too late,
And I'll already be 6 feet in the ground.

I Miss You Jerry.

My best friend ran away a couple days ago and this is how I'm dealing I guess.

P.S. I just got over my writers block so tell me what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Wow!A truly amazing poem.Loved it!I didn't really like the way it was set up but other then that it was an excellent poem(no suprise :D)Anyways 5/5 from me again.

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by abcede

    Hey... i love that you're getting out all of your emotions... just try to make it flow a little more:)

    abcede

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm i like the message it was very touch piece! the essence of this poet was really great and i think it has great dedication to everyone! just keep on writing all what u feel im sure it helps u alot to express ur feelings for writing it. great job keep it up! nice flow and it well written 5/5

    god bless!

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Ecellent poem very heartfelt and true, the words really touch the reader especially if they've experienced the same pain. The whole thing about not knowing what you have until it's gone comes into play, and how easily and fast it can all be taken away. Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    For this one, I notice the simplicity of it..I kind a combination of love and sad poem...Friendship?
    Although for me its short, you really conveyed your message on it!

    keep it up!

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