No More Cries

This poem was too short.Your supposed to make the reader feel the emotion of your poetry.I felt nothing.It was as if I blinked and then it was over.Nice rhyming though.

I think this piece was a little too simple, for me anyway. I don't like complicated poems, but this just didn't tell enough, I feel. As with all your piece I've read and commented on, with the exception of one, your first stanza was the best, I particularly liked the last line of the first stanza 'Miss you much'.

Brad

Ok you want to know what i love about this poem? ill tell you lol
i love how you have to read into you can't just read the words and totally get it you made it deeper than that and i love it : ) 5/5 <3

I love it.. kinda sounds like me and my man which is locked up right now that is the way i feel i just never could put it in words

It was short and sweet. i liked it a lot =)