Comments : Crawling Inside

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    I dont know how to describe this poem...its dark, , sad, expressive, wonderful..truthful......amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    The last stanza was a little strange, I think you could make the ending that tiny bit better. As usual its dark, twisting, but romantic and enchanting. Just once I'd like to read a poem from you that had happy imagery, lol, though thats not your style. Perhaps you could write one just for me. Think of it as a challenge... Otherwise keep it up, the imagery is vivid and its amazing to have followed you from the early stages of your writing to pieces like this!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... So, someone knows that exact feeling? I;m surprised, lol :) I can deeply relate to this astonishing piece of yours, truly impressive poem.
    You expressed emotions mantled with deepest darkness... amazing!