I loved this piece. it was beautiful. very deep and touching. and the title was perfect.

wont you take me in and guide me through
help me see past the shadows
I'm too far gone and so far lost
to ever turn around and come back home
its a quarter to tomorrow and I'm on the edge
I'm slipping and falling, its breaking again

i loved those lines the most. they really caught my attention, and i had to reread it over again to get the feeling. especially the first two lines, i could really relate to. you did a wonderful job on this. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Whoa.. this is very powerful. running into the arms of a stranger hmm... it might help. the stranger might help me more then the ones that care. whoa.. very nicely writen . Please do keep it. i shall be reading on.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Wow this is a very strong poem
don't stop writing. your good.