Under Construction

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Nov 6, 2007


Zoom in.

Little yellow hats sit
On the heads of little men,
As they race around the chambers
And build the walls up once again.

"Please excuse the mess,"
Several orange signs say,
As the whining drills spin 'round
And the hammers pound away.

Rubble and debris
On what used to be a floor,
But since the slight disaster,
My heart is nothing more.

Blood is flowing freely
Down the fault line in the base,
Just another scar
That I can't possibly erase.

Zoom out.

Big and red and pulsing,
An oddly broken shape,
A heart inside an open chest,
Wrapped in caution tape.

I whisper out so quietly,
Surviving mass destruction,
"My heart cannot yet love you,
It's closed down for construction."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    How can your poem have been viewed 88 times without anyone commenting on it? I am just in awe at the way you ended it. It all flowed so beautifully together!!! Wow. 5/5

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