Awwww! I love the topic of this poem, Ichy! It's so sad though... I think I know what you're talking about. It's true about me as well...
Well, great poem, and I wouldn't change a thing ^_^ 5/5

Hari
~KeepDreaming~

I know how you feel. It hurts so much, yet just looking at that one I love so much just counters all that pain when she looks at me....But uh...That is enough of my pain. I enjoy how you just expressed your emotions. So sad....Very good job

Keep smiling,

Ben

Wow this is so true i know that it hurt it hurts more when they are with someone eles nices work

Wow Ichy! I can totally relate.. it's short but yet very sad. Has lots of emotion and sadness all built up in it. Great job hun! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Yeah sgreed, so true.....god damn life is one bigggg crrrp hole isnt it lol nice poem..

Interesting choice of words and line breaks...the great thing about this poem is that its not easy to follow.

Fantastic poem, really meant alot so short but so powerful, definatly going to my favs
thanks for sharing your poems 5/5

Short, simple but excellent poem!!!!well written..
good job..5/5

Short. Simple. Powerful.
i love this cause i can totally relate to the poem