Comments : Take my hand (Parquette)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    This is absolutly beautiful. Excellent job on the poetry form.

    Take my hand
    hold it tight
    Memories of pain trickling away
    in a desire for something better

    This is a desire that so many wish for. How lucky to have a friendship like you share with Ingrid.
    Excellent job!
    ~hugs~ Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a nice friendship poem....Ingrid is so lucky! Nice job on the form......

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awww Sammy!

    You did it!!!
    How sweet of you to dedicate a poem to silly old me, ha!
    I am so honored and blessed to have a wonderful friend like you in my life.
    I will never, ever let go of you , my sweet friend.
    Our friendship means the world to me!

    Nothing less than a 5/5 for my Sam!

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really very beautiful poem.
    Keep up the good work.

    God bless u n ur friend

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Take my hand
    hold it tight
    Memories of pain trickling away
    in a desire for something better

    This whole poem symbolises the beauty of friendship. I liked the repetition at the beginning of each the stanzas. What a lovely tribute to Ingrid. You seem like a true dedicated friend.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is powerful, bro. The way you wrote this shines throughout the entire poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by msluckyone

    That is so sweet :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    Congrats on this wonderful piece being one of the picks for featured writer of the week.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I still love this poem so much, Sammy.... I wish I could just grab your hand and run away from it all :(

    Love, always

    Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This was so sweet Sam :) Ingrid is indeed a wonderful and amazing friend :) Once again another 5.0 :)