Wuuuu scary :) i like it, reminds me of my lil pet werewoof on facebook :D I also kinda could relate this poem to me and that lil deamon that sometimes tries to run a muck in me lol :) another absolutly amazing poem miss :) love your work :)) 5/5
Such an imaginative piece, and it told such a dark and descriptive story. To me it was unpredictable, it wasnt a poem that you could predict the ending within the first couple of lines. So it was good that it was more of a thriller. I do think though that someones been watching too many werewolf films lol :D
'Nobody is safe whilst the moon is still full
In the night side of Eden, is the human race cull'
Extremely creepy, very descriptive, i can see the room, window chair and the beast. Great use of words and imagery. I have read many Werewolf poems but this one has a different edge to it like a tortured soul. I really loved it where do you get your ideas:)
Beautiful Gem! I think my own hair is still standing on end, your poem put me IN that room watching his grisly transformation. Absolutely brillant. I think my favorite couple of lines were:
"He sits in the corner, clutching onto his chair
Feeling the bristles of his fast growing hair"
I liked this piece, as before, it was very well written. The wording was superb, as well as the rhymes and flow, blah, blah, you've heard it all before, lol. But the story and the words were what really made this piece great. I loved the first two lines of the last stanza, they were brillaintly written. I think my favorite stanza was the first one though.
This is such an incredible piece...and true to your style. Your words always have the ability to cut through me Gem. It's amazing how talented you are. My fav lines were-
His hungry black eyes darting out of control
This is the result of selling your soul
-I like it so much because it paints an intense picture and at the same time allows you FEEL what the problem is...I'm not sure if that makes much sense, lol. Anyways, it's incredible as always girl! Oh! And incredible title, immediately captures your attention! 5/5 of course! :)