Comments : In The Nightside Of Eden

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    You have made a good choice of words and the imagery and flow are very tight.

    Your pieces are always so enjoyable to read.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Gem, this poem is BEAUTIFUL. Just beautifully written.

    The imagery you portray in this piece is wonderfully displayed, very striking and it created some vivid pictures in my mind.

    Flow is flawless throughout, and that ending...wow. Just..perfect!

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Quite chilling and very descriptive.
    I'm not a fan of dark poems but this one was really good. But then of course it was written by you, an amazing poet.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Great job on this piece hun. Very descriptive. Imagery is awesome. Gave me chills as I read it.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wuuuu scary :) i like it, reminds me of my lil pet werewoof on facebook :D I also kinda could relate this poem to me and that lil deamon that sometimes tries to run a muck in me lol :) another absolutly amazing poem miss :) love your work :)) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Gem,

    You painted a very vivid picture of a creature that is feared for in all cultures! It chilled me to the bone, brrrrr!

    Take care and keep them formats coming!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That is very descriptive and imaginative. It feels so much like a story. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lucifer

    That was really well written. there was a lot of thought put into it. good job.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very good and descriptive....I enjoyed the dark scary feel to it......good flow and rhymes.....

  • 10 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    Nice, considering that i love werewolves, its a gr8 poem 4 me 2 read. i love the imagery that u used keep writing.
    ~kim

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    This was wonderful, I wish that I had your writing ability. You have such a way with words and a broader vocabulary. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Such an imaginative piece, and it told such a dark and descriptive story. To me it was unpredictable, it wasnt a poem that you could predict the ending within the first couple of lines. So it was good that it was more of a thriller. I do think though that someones been watching too many werewolf films lol :D

    Take Care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    'Nobody is safe whilst the moon is still full
    In the night side of Eden, is the human race cull'

    Extremely creepy, very descriptive, i can see the room, window chair and the beast. Great use of words and imagery. I have read many Werewolf poems but this one has a different edge to it like a tortured soul. I really loved it where do you get your ideas:)
    (5/5)
    Take care

    Kelly
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very good poem.
    Great imagery and word choise.
    I really enjoyed reading it!
    Take care!

  • 9 years ago

    by SilentRebuke

    Beautiful Gem! I think my own hair is still standing on end, your poem put me IN that room watching his grisly transformation. Absolutely brillant. I think my favorite couple of lines were:
    "He sits in the corner, clutching onto his chair
    Feeling the bristles of his fast growing hair"

    Truly a great piece, I can't say it enough.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow great poem... it gave me the chills, it actually has more meaning than the warewolf stuff... it gives you an idea that is about all criminals in general... good job

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked this piece, as before, it was very well written. The wording was superb, as well as the rhymes and flow, blah, blah, you've heard it all before, lol. But the story and the words were what really made this piece great. I loved the first two lines of the last stanza, they were brillaintly written. I think my favorite stanza was the first one though.

    Brad

  • 9 years ago

    by A girl broken until

    An awesome poem packed with plenty of imagery!!!
    If it could it would be the blockbuster of the month!!
    Great work

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Great words and a wonderful image penned. I really liked this piece. You have a good poets pen in your hands.

  • 9 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This is such an incredible piece...and true to your style. Your words always have the ability to cut through me Gem. It's amazing how talented you are. My fav lines were-
    His hungry black eyes darting out of control
    This is the result of selling your soul
    -I like it so much because it paints an intense picture and at the same time allows you FEEL what the problem is...I'm not sure if that makes much sense, lol. Anyways, it's incredible as always girl! Oh! And incredible title, immediately captures your attention! 5/5 of course! :)
    ~Jules