Recreating Beauty

by Nigel Oliver   Nov 8, 2007


I glanced at the light of this beautiful night.
Such a sight, not touched by blight.
Enraptured by glistening glimmer,
Then it all started to dimmer.

All of nights colors started to fade,
Sunrise will come, even if i prayed.
The light that i saw, left me in awe.
Lost forever now, but i could still draw.

I tried to recreate such beauty,
I felt as if it was my duty.

I as an artist try to recreate, it is my fate.
Maybe someday i'll be great.

Copyright (c) Nigel Oliver
2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Very very inspiring.
    great job, so amazingly written
    draws you in and makes you picture
    wow. just wow.
    keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    One word: inspirational. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The last two lines werent perfect, and that kind of drawed my attention to how brilliant the first stanza was. Amazingly written, with such awesome beauty. i love nature and i loved how you captured the beauty of it so well.
    love always, Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Your words truly painted a flawless piece of imagery. Each line flowed perfectly and the rhyme scheme was effective. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the imagery you portrayed in this piece, so beautifully done and creating such vivid pictures for the reader.

    I thought the flow was good for the most part, just in a couple places it was shaky, and I noticed that there were quite a few fillers (I, anf, the etc) which I think is what disrupted it.

    Try eliminating some of those and you'll find the flow goes so much smoother.

    Apart from that though, I thought this was very pretty and elegantly written.

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