A really sad poem, showing lots of emotion.

She's right, how you repeated the first and third line in eac stanza was incredibly effective in expressing what you felt.

I enjoyed this piece.

5/5

This is also great. The emotion flowed very well!!! Keep up the good work.

This is a very well written dark poem, It does make me sad that so many feel this way, but it is a worthy theme in dark poetry 5/5

Wow. What an ending. Well, the emotion was deep and I felt your pain. But it seemed as if the poem was to repetitive, next time maybe switch it up a bit. Great job!

Amber..

Wow very sad...but its a great poem!!!...

This poem is really good
the repetition of the 1st and 3rd lines really gets the message across and makes the poem more powerful
the first stanza really got my attention and was very effect
the emotion was deep and made the poem that bit much better its very sad but amazing

5/5