I love it .because mi grandpa fought in one war and mi dad was a bomb thing
and now ima lose mi bro cause he is going to the marines

This is great...
I've never lost someone to war but this feels like you're really passionate about the war and its heroes =]
Good jod
Sarah

This is a really good poem. My grandad was in WWII and thankfully he survived. I never really got to know him as he died 3 months after I was born.
Anyway this is a really good poem. 5/5
thanks for the comment you left on my poem
Kalee

Amen to all the men who faught for us

Very well written i think this poem came out VERY well my gandfather was in WW2 and the Korean war and he was a POW but because his rank was so when they did the prisoner exchange he was 1 of the first to be traded but i did not get to meet him due to the fact he died 2 and a half years before i was born you should check out my poems titled 9/11 and grandpa

Nice poem and great dedication for the soldiers, i liked the poem. 5/5

That's really good... one of my favorites. Almost made me cry...
5/5

This is really great. The great imagery, great word picking, really love this one. 5/5 no doubt!!!

I lvoe it.
My uncle was sent out to Germany since he's in the military...And i miss him greatly!

Keep writing!
5/5

~ally

Great poem honoring all the people who fight for our freedom and safety good job!