Story Of A Girl~*

by Angel Of Death   Nov 10, 2007


This is the story of a girl
who tripped into love.
Found the man who meant the world,
her angel from up above.

He said he was the one,
the one to make her complete.
But he had his fun and walked away,
Left her begging at his feet.

Started out so perfect,
she was happy everyday.
But yet again, she's sad,
cause now he's so far away.

She believed he was for real,
That it wasn't just a game.
She could tell you everything about him,
But he probably can't even tell you her name.

Guess it true that things
really aren't what they seem.
She thought he was "the one",
But he was the one to crush her dreams.

xx love

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  • 16 years ago

    by SarahhJayy

    Brilliant
    Amazing
    I Can Relate
    5/5
    loves ;; x

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Good flow, especially liked the final verse

  • 16 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    I love the subject of the poem. it felt so real to read, very raw and frank. honesty is a powerful tool when it comes to writing, so keep up the goood work

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that sucks. You finally think they are the right one and yeah they screw u over. Well written poem. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "Guess it true that things
    really aren't what they seem.
    She thought he was "the one",
    But he was the one to crush her dreams."

    I fell in love w/ this poem..it is so relatable & the emotions were so vivid & raw..great write!

    Brooke<3

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