Bill
Wow I read this and got chills...excellent job my friend.

Spitting a life time of hurt upon the walk
Watching it smolder, burn, turn black
Knowing that it will come yet again
Retching the evil of my sinful deeds
Oh how my life sometimes bleeds

This stanza really got to me. You did an amazing job on this piece.
Take care Cindy

Bill,
We all do sinfull deeds, thats just human!
You made an amazing poem about it, most people just hide the badness they have within themselves. I takes a strong man to admitt to his faults and weaknesses. Over time this will only make you stronger and a better person.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Bill,
We all do sinfull deeds, thats just human!
You made an amazing poem about it, most people just hide the badness they have within themselves. I takes a strong man to admitt to his faults and weaknesses. Over time this will only make you stronger and a better person.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid