Comments : Shattered glass of a broken heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    Amazing, besides being "A girl no one else can see" I feel exactly where your coming from, haha. This piece kind of feels like a song to me, seems like it could make a great one. Hope the future is brighter, and keep up the good work. ~Zach

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo88

    Wow u are good i added u as i fav authors i love ur work with poems is beep 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem honestly brought tears to my eyes. It touched my heart and I loved it! The flow was beautiful and I adore your choice of words. It was very neat and organized, the work of a professional! I can relate to it in many ways as I'm sure others can as well. Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Wow, your very good, keep up the great work ^^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    I really liked this one. it shows me just how many lonely people there really are, and you are one of few who can artistically express themselves. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Omg this is sooo emotional... great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Like always, this was amazing. You rock my sox.

    -mello