Comments : Melodies Of Life

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The rhyme worked well. Fantastic job from you. Great one!!! 5/5 from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This poem is a very nice poem. The flow was very good and I enjoyed reading it.
    Keep up the good work 5/5.
    P.s-thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Esther

    ' Lose yourself in a melodic shimmer, ' and 'You'll lose yourself in the magical flow.' were my favourite lines, i really like this poem..it flowed well..and i liked the message i got

  • Very beautiful poem. The flow and rhyming were just amazing. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    This poem is really good... your use of wording is great.. you have allot of talent 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    You use of imagery here was just wonderful. The emotions were real and the poem was overall a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This was amazing! I love the way that you rhyme your poems, it makes them flow, and read, well. You are really creative and write with lovely emotions. *5/5*

    I can't wait to read more ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    I liked it alot! five/five! good job!

    mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Nice choice of rhyming words. It flows just right.
    ~ Keep it real ~
    Nicole xx