Comments : Applause to the Blackness

  • 16 years ago

    by Esther

    Numb...is what killers are..they become hollow..or they'd never be able to kill innocent life;

    i liked your poem it speaks the truth

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The first two stanzas I loved the flow but after that it seemed to go off a fair bit. I liked the meaning portrayed behind this piece I do agree it speaks the truth. I can't find why the poem was rocky I think just some of the words didn't go together so well. Overall still a good read. Well done. ~Mel