Comments : Sea Of Sorrow (Sonnet II)

  • 11 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    This one speaks exactly what im feeling. i loved it! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You and your sonnets lol. Love them! This poem was beautiful you know I always like reading your love poems they are nicely expressed. I just want to say congrats by the way on the gold favorites you deserve it. Well done. ~Mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Wonderful job on this piece. The love and sadness come through in your words. Imagery is great.

    In a sea of sorrow my soul will be,
    Trapped alone here for all eternity

    What a haunting sad ending.
    Great job!
    Take care Cindy