Comments : Blossoms.

  • 10 years ago

    by vintage darling

    Your imagery and ciomparison is really good.

    great poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Patience

    This is such a beautiful write. The colors painted a bright and vivid picture. Great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    This is such a beautifully stunning piece that nearly brought me to tears, and i've never said that it in a comment before, i was completely captivated by your word usage, romance escalates throughout, and it's one of the finest love poems ive read in a long time, the length to me was perfect, i wish the love portrayed in this piece belonged to me..
    john

  • 10 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    I LOVED it, but two things
    1 Some of the words were a bit long and threw me off a bit (Im not good w/ long words)
    2 Something about the rhythm dodn't seem quit right, IDK what it was but it was there, it the first half.

    The length was perfect for me. I prefer shorter poems.
    5/5
    ~onyx~

  • 10 years ago

    by Blissful

    What flawless imagery!

    Each word was so beautiful and while reading it, I read it slow, to savor each emotion. Your language was breath taking the poem as a whole really captured my interest.

    "Souls paralyzed by infatuation"
    ^a beautiful line filled with reality yet dreamy.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow, that was amazing. It brought tears to my eyes and i dont know why.6/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was beautiful, I loved the imagery you created into my mind. So elegant, gorgeous, and enchanting. The flow was lovely and the word choice perfect. Each line held so much which was written in great depth. A romantic poem to me, really pretty, and capturing. Well done. I loved reading this enjoyable read. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love this one, I usually don't like poems with few stanzas. But I can relate this one and this is simply amazing and brilliantly written!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    And also you deserve 5/5 for this one!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Marci

    Ok you wanted the truth so here it is....This poem is Awesome! Yes, its small, but thats the best kind if you ask me. and I agree with the change..(rose to ruby) I love it! 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    This is a beautiful poem with lots of emotion. well written and great imagery.
    i didnt see any errors... i must be the only one that has trouble typing. lol

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This was beautiful.
    && the image you create in the reader's
    mind. is indescribable.
    5/5.