I would do anything to keep you breathing.....

by Joshua Grider   Nov 17, 2007


I would take my life if it meant you keeping yours.
Jump in front of a car and it's hard metal doors.

I would give you my parachute in a burning plane.
I would take a hit from a flying crane.

I would tell the beast to take me instead of you.
I would drink the toxic, poisonus green goo.

I would do anything you could imagine to save your life.
Get stabd from a man in a mask swinging a sharp knife.

I would take a bullet to the heart for you and you only.
For my heart is forever yours, just you and you'rs soley.

I would do anything to keep you breathing.....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Enigma

    I actually loved this.
    I'd love for someone to value me this highly =/

  • 15 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I loved the energy and deep emotion in this poem. I do hope that your love never has to be proven or pushed to that limit. Must be nice having love that intense for someone:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This is really beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by StarLightxInHisEyes

    Wow Joshua...that's just beautiful. I just started reading your poetry and it goes straight to the heart. It's simple yet mens everything. I would give it 10 even though it's not on the scale. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I would take my life if it meant you keeping yours.
    Jump in front of a car and it's hard metal doors.

    Hi Joshua,

    this stanza stands out for me because it's funny. This poem is very sweet and endearing and it was a joy to read!
    Keep up the great work.

    Take care,

    Ingrid

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