Wow, long time no read. Lol. But this was a beautiful peice. The flow was perfect and the story line was amazing. I can totally relate. The emotion was deep and the hatred towards how much you love him is purely expressed. Great job!
5/5

Amber..

I love the emotion you put into this. I can relate to it and its wonderful that some many others also can. You write from your own heart, but it resembles the hearts of many and that is a true talent. This poem was so deep and held so meaning. It is very hard when we lose the person we think loves us and it hurts even more when we want so much just to hate them. But you'll be ok, you're strong and I know you'll get through this. Remember, you can always talk to me, I keep you in my prayers. You're a talented girl and you deserve someone who appriciates that.
<3Raych

Awww this is sooo cute has lots of emotion and i no who its bout lol but alec and steph broke up again so go for it u butface lol ily

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