Comments : If wishes could come true

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    What a beautiful poem of love you have penned. The imagery is fantastic.

    Gazing into the depth of your eyes
    In awe of the beauty and sheer
    captivating serenity of the face
    of this man I hold so dear

    This stanza really tugs the heart strings. To have ths feeling once again. Can feel the longing coming from your words.

    Hazel colored eyes that haunt
    my every dream both day and night
    Always in my thoughts, my love
    Images of holding you so tight

    These feelings of love where the other person occupies all your thoughts night and day.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow..this is really a very sensual poem, loved it right from the title.

    beautifully written, simple and yet so powerful....just like Love.

    great write

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very heartfelt poem Hun, very deep and emotional.. great write Hun :)

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Ingrid this is absolutely beautiful...so tender and touching....I can read the longing in the lines....

    "Meetings after midnight
    Hearts that skip a beat
    when face to face and skin to skin
    Enchanted by love's fire when we meet"

    ^ I can relate to these lines more than you know....hope all your dreams come true! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I don't remember reading this poem before it sure very sweet and beatiful poem, no wonder it won the contest
    really piece of art, very good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlight

    Its as if You have written what I am going through now...Touched me a lot ...Great work......keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    A very beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Pondering on a future shared
    If wishes could come true
    I would want us to be together
    just me, your little girl and you
    ^^^
    I love this ending stanza. It gives me an image of you staring into the star filled sky .... wishing upon a falling star.
    I can feel the longing in your words as though they were whispered upon the sky.

    Wonderful read my friend!
    The title captivated my attention and whisked me away into a wonderful verse.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a cute poem... keep up the good work 5/5

    xoxoxo
    Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a cute poem... keep up the good work 5/5

    xoxoxo
    Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    What can I say that others haven't already? beautifully penned.

    peace and good luck
    shobhana

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracey777taintedslitta

    This is so beautiful, wow, you love so deeply. amazing some1 can feel tthat much hey? also can relate...

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    An excellent poem Ingrid, written from the heart. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    So many ppl have read this poem ingrid, 4000 and more! you have many fans, i am included!

    5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    It is a wonderful feeling and you express it very well. I hope you can be with him someday,very well written poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chase

    Aww!! You write alluring love poems I must say!! ^^!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Superlative Write, Excellent, Enjoyed!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    A beautiful poem with all meanings, loved every word in it.

    "Hazel colored eyes that haunt
    my every dream both day and night
    Always in my thoughts, my love
    Images of holding you so tight"

    Reminds me of the dreams I have of the hazel colored eyes. Great usage of words.

  • 15 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Very heart felt. love it! =)

  • 15 years ago

    by expressivechild

    This is very very loving and sweet! It gives me a smile as I am reading it. I am amazed!