Perfection was a Drop of Blood

by The Queen of Spades   Nov 19, 2007


Perfection was a taste
Of your ivory skin
Breaking quietly
In my hungry mouth
I felt the world
Spinning fast
A whirling void
Of dark crimson
The shade of night

Perfection was the smell
Of your luscious presence
Drawing me in,
Keeping me captivated
I lost my will
To run away to the moon
For your scent
Kept me warm
I wanted to be near

Perfection was your eyes
That enrapturing glint
Hypnotizing the organ
Where my heart would be
The sensations
Of human mortality
Still linger, still dwell
Leaving me frightened
In a stage of red liquidation

Perfection was, a drop of blood
In my mouth
From your enthusiastic corpse
Giving me heat, giving me life
In such beautiful ways
A dichotomy of innocence and evil

*written for a contest*

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    You really know how to pick a great title. Most of your poems have eye-catching title. Beside that you really know how to write!!!

    Perfection was your eyes
    That enrapturing glint
    Hypnotizing the organ
    Where my heart would be
    The sensations
    Of human mortality
    Still linger, still dwell
    Leaving me frightened
    In a stage of red liquidation

    That stanza's what I loved the most. I love your wordage. Another 5/5 job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror

    WOW! Oh, this is one of the best poems I've every read! It is so POWERFUL! Every line is so fine!
    Aspects of this brilliance kill every emotions in me and give me the emotions that you expressed in this brilliant piece.
    My favorte stanzas are the first and the last, because they're so great, hun!
    Keep up & have fun :}
    Bye!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    Awsome poem dude!

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By The Queen of Spades