Yesterdays and tomorrows

by Keath   Nov 19, 2007


It's not your insanity
That cries out for mercy
The better leaves of an auburn draft

It's not in vane's vanity
To claim her turpentine sea
And find the final theft
To be trust, in her direction

Nature has no rectangular serenity
A breast bone from the harp's plea
Fastidious promises cracked the line
A minority for the flaw of affection

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  • 16 years ago

    by El

    Great piece! Wonderfully written and amazing imagery!
    =)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simple but sweet. Well written and I like the flow. Another 5/5 from me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow, wow... I'm speechless... I haven't read so powerful poem about life in a while.
    This is so deep and it touched me in so many ways. You're truly great poet, you paint brilliant pictures with words. This is enjoyable read, filled with hidden meanings and amazing imagery.
    Well done!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Amazing imagery and wording. These lines got to me the most. 5/5

    "Nature has no rectangular serenity
    A breast bone from the harp's plea"

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was very well written. i liked it very much. but it did feel a little forced. try to make it feel more relaxed.
    very good poem though