Comments : Death Looms (Nonet)

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This was a lovely poem and very original, I applaud you for that. I found just one thing wrong, but I only noticed it because it didn't seem to read right.

    "Strolls in a rough and bumpy road"

    Was the "in" in this sentence suppose to be "on"? I was just wondering, if it was I thought it would be good for me to let you know. Keep up the good work. *5/5*