Hen's life

by Jyoti Rawat   Nov 19, 2007


In a butchered shop having a cage of hens.
Butcher picks one of them every day cut their head
Remaining hens watching this process every day
Each hen know that one days they will be cut it down

Once, one of them falls ill.
She was suffering from terrible pain
None of them bothered her.
She told them why are you not curing me?
They told her that one day butchered will kill you.
You have to die then why you want to get well.
I don’t know when the butchered will kill me.
May be tomorrow or it can be month
Then why I shall die today?
I will live until I can

They said ok and starts her cure
Within two or three days she gets well
And the next day butchered man come and
Put his hand into the cage of hens.
Pick one them and cut her head
Her blood splash on the cage and
Here head fell on the floor.
It was the same hen,
And other were watching or waiting for
Their turn.

(Massage: Live until then you can
In this poem I am try to put hen’s pain and their courage)

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  • 3 years ago

    by anand singh

    When I begin to read this I had no idea what to expect, but as I continue reading I saw the meaning and the image you try to portray.Nice poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    This is a very nice message to express in a poem and using a hen in a butchers shop how clever i liked the idea and your words great job 5.5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Thanx, My english is not good. Thanx for understand my thought.

  • 9 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Well ur title really caught my eye...i read it thoroughly...good depiction of thoughts going in the mind of a hen..I guess the grammar and all hardly matters cause it's your thought that really speaks louder than any words... and i understand it. So I gave it a 5 on 5.

    Regards,
    Neo Castelino.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Hey i like the theme.. Maybe you need some help... No doubt the concept is nice, but still there are certain areas where you need correction. grammar is one such area. spell error are ok... but i like your concept. njoi!

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