Comments : Hen's life

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Thanx for comment me.

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now this is indeed very unique, great write

    all the best and take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Hey i like the theme.. Maybe you need some help... No doubt the concept is nice, but still there are certain areas where you need correction. grammar is one such area. spell error are ok... but i like your concept. njoi!

  • 9 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Well ur title really caught my eye...i read it thoroughly...good depiction of thoughts going in the mind of a hen..I guess the grammar and all hardly matters cause it's your thought that really speaks louder than any words... and i understand it. So I gave it a 5 on 5.

    Regards,
    Neo Castelino.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Thanx, My english is not good. Thanx for understand my thought.

  • 9 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    This is a very nice message to express in a poem and using a hen in a butchers shop how clever i liked the idea and your words great job 5.5

  • 3 years ago

    by anand singh

    When I begin to read this I had no idea what to expect, but as I continue reading I saw the meaning and the image you try to portray.Nice poem.