Hey i like the theme.. Maybe you need some help... No doubt the concept is nice, but still there are certain areas where you need correction. grammar is one such area. spell error are ok... but i like your concept. njoi!
Well ur title really caught my eye...i read it thoroughly...good depiction of thoughts going in the mind of a hen..I guess the grammar and all hardly matters cause it's your thought that really speaks louder than any words... and i understand it. So I gave it a 5 on 5.