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by xBehindTheseHazelEyesx Nov 19, 2007
Love, romance /
We started as acquaintances
exchanging smiles in the hall
the classic conversations
this meant so much when the deed was so small
then you were my friend
when i was in need, it was you that was there
you helped me hold my head strong
when life seemed too grueling to bear
suddenly I'm feeling more
you're different than the rest
and now i feel a throb
from the heart inside my chest
I'm falling faster now
i feel the chemistry when you look into my eyes
oh boy i don't know what it is
but you give me butterflies
sweetie now you've got me
i see us holding hands under moonlit skies
our first kiss in the down pouring rain
what I'm feeling; this is such a surprise
innocence at its best
I'm abruptly feeling scared
i think it might be love
but i couldn't say it if i dared-first poem i wrote.
i know its not the best.
but its just how i felt at the time.
comments and suggestions are nice
Well this was a hell of a good start, im looking forward to ur future work coz this was excellent!
u capture feelings and describe them soo well =D
Very good...keep up the good work
Well it being ur first its really good
I CAN RELATE TO THIS...I ENJOYED IT..=]
This is a really good poem. and it also shows alot of emotion! You are really good at writing!! im new at this too and i only have 2 poems and i think that yours are way better than mine!!! great job!