While I do enjoy your poems, and believe me you have an amazing sense of description in this poem as always specifically I am the beat, but I do not find it as good as most of the poems I have read from you mainly at this point:
and then in the light.
I am here in every light

It just feels it is repeating somewhat the same thing and the ending does not leave me with the amount of awe that the whole middle of the poem had me feeling. I still like it though as much of your works.

Wow.
I really like that, Hun.
It's quite amazing.
It was like flawless perfection. (:

You did a wonderful job, once again.