Again, your really good, keep it up :) :)

I love this poem. i went through this and this poem is like expressing every thought wen i see him...
[[r a y r a y]]

I can't stand being far
I need you.
and no one makes me happier
the way you do.

Rachelle,

These words really touched my heart.
You made a very beautiful poem, easy to relate to.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I just had to re comment this, it is really really good