Comments : My only love

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is very beautiful and endlessly touching, truly greatly written love poem. Very emotional piece, with the feelings expressed in a great way. You did a good job with rhymes which created great flow through the whole piece.
    My favorite lines are:

    -You'll always be in my heart
    and nothing can ever tare us apart.
    You are my world, my life it seems
    your in my thoughts and all my dreams.-

    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Melody

    This is very beautiful , cute, sweet and touching.
    And as always nicely written, you are the best!=)...5/5
    ....Melody..=)

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    This is a very beautiful poem. Very sweet and captures how as long as you have to someone to love who loves you back it just seems like everything in life will be fine and work itself out. Lovely poem, beautiful words like that make me smile:) (5/5)

    Kelly
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's a cute love poem
    full of appreciation and promises

    good luck

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    Excellent poem of love! Very well written. I like all the rhymes. Well done, its beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that's sweet. I hope i have the pleasure to get someone this special to me in my life. Great job.
    -vino

  • 10 years ago

    by Jackie

    WOW, your wife is one lucky lady. Such a beautiful love poem, full of emotion. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sweet one!
    You are very lucky to have someone like her, and she´s very lucky to have someone like you.
    Very well written
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by AJ

    Man great job, that was very nice

  • 10 years ago

    by Julie

    Very sweet and well written! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by minh

    Very good, i enjoyed it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Nawa

    That was so sweet and touching. Great poem.

    "You'll always be in my heart
    and nothing can ever tare us apart.
    You are my world, my life it seems
    your in my thoughts and all my dreams."

    Lovely !! Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very very nice tracy!!! i missed reading your stuff!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    Love poem rhymes with purity, so naturally. Like this love feels so pure and natural. Nice Blend. Beautiful writing, still.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Wonderful ending. Great...I love it!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Wonderful ending. Great...I love it!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is a very beautiful love poem. :) You did an amazing job portraying your emotions. 5/5