This is very beautiful and endlessly touching, truly greatly written love poem. Very emotional piece, with the feelings expressed in a great way. You did a good job with rhymes which created great flow through the whole piece.
My favorite lines are:
-You'll always be in my heart
and nothing can ever tare us apart.
You are my world, my life it seems
your in my thoughts and all my dreams.-
This is a very beautiful poem. Very sweet and captures how as long as you have to someone to love who loves you back it just seems like everything in life will be fine and work itself out. Lovely poem, beautiful words like that make me smile:) (5/5)