Here i come

by Brian Yazzie   Nov 25, 2007


The day it all started
a movement of a pen
inked with emotions
from deep within
thinking i was weak hearted
expressing my opinion
only came to be
sorrows of my two fists
into a positive
of negativity
so,in reality
i'am strong hearted
with this pen
and a piece of paper
verbally,creatively
let me be
a poet
is who i came to be...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Again, simply brilliant.....i guess tats how all of us started out :)
    thanks for the comment :)
    keep writing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    Thanx for the comment..have a goodnite,baby
    i only write whats real,u know

  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    That's one thing you have in common with the rest of us weirdos on this site- we're all 'poets!!'
    But seriously now, I liked it. It was a rushed stanza mimicing the rush of emotions as you descovered the pen. Thanks for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Whooa, good choice of the word u put out. THIS IS GREAT. U are good!

  • 16 years ago

    by KATIE

    KEEP UR HEAD!..THIS WAS SHORT BUT GOOD!

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