Sam
I love this. The imagery is perfect for the piece.

As you fulfill my every wish,
I'll pray for you each day,
For all your dreams to come true,
If you just remember me this way.

All the stanzas were beautiful and touched my heart. This stanza just stood out to me. I'm glad my poem inspired you to write this. Thank you :)
Love Cindy

Very nice write.. the sense of hope throughout the whole piece was.... beautiful..

"For all your dreams to come true,
If you just remember me this way."

A fantastic piece.. very easy to relate to.. how heartbreaking hope can be.. Well done!!

As you fulfill my every wish,
I'll pray for you each day,
For all your dreams to come true,
If you just remember me this way

this is beautiful poem, just so refreshing..and i so very much loved the ending...great write dear friend

all the best and take care

Embrace my soul for years to come....

These are very strong words..I love them!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Very beautiful and lovely dedication Sam....so sweet and pure in it's emotions....

"Please come and take my hand,
Hold on to it tight,
Guide me through the darkness,
Help me find the light,"

^ I've always seen love as a beacon...lighting the way out of the darkness....very well done!

Take care, Debbie

Samatha, this is a beautiful dedication to your love.An amazing heartfelt poem very well penned.

Regards
chavii.

I love this. it's written from the bottom of your heart and it seems that Cindy was a great inspiration, of course, who wouldn't be inspired by her? lol but this was very good and i could feel the love flowing out of it. Very good effect.
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

Wow i like this one
i miss being in love

THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU DESERVE 5/5