Comments : The Weight On Your Shoulders

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    This poem is well written and keeps my mind going
    it was well thought out by a very intelegent person as i am percieving through this wright
    i rate this a 5/5
    great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Wow this was sooo well written. your a really good writter keep it up. i give you a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Great poem i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is so beautiful.... Reading it has my eyes tearing up from the beauty of it. The imagery you used is just wonderful. The flow was absolutely flawless; and the rhyming was on key. I was captivated from the beginning to the end. The emotion of it just pulled me in. You are a fantastic writer. I am adding this poem to my favorites. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This poem is like a dream once you read it you live it...

    I wish you all the best..
    keep writing