I really love this poem and it has a nice flow to it too....5/5

Very wonderful poem, you can tell that it was written from the heart! Some lucky lady you have there, im sure if you have shown this to her, she loves it! I love the flow if this piece, it was great.

The only thing that i would suggest changing is the ending.. i felt that it didn't end as powerful as it should have... this is a great poem, and the ending should be great as well

Keep up the great work! :]