Very poweful writing
loved it
except for one thing,if you double spaced between each line it would flow nicer.
but overall ,great work
keep it up!

Hey..i normally dont like poems that dont rhyme..i guess i jus like the rythm..but this poem is beautiful..wish i could find true love lol..oh well im only young

I love ur poem its great

Oh my goodness I loved this, it ias if it were form a dreamy, so loving and romantic, I LOVE IT!!!!

Oh my goodness I loved this, it ias if it were form a dreamy, so loving and romantic, I LOVE IT!!!!